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Paid the full $10 ? if so scroll up hit the download button next to where it says that you purchased the game for $10 you'll have three download options choose the third one that says 0.5.1b

I give the game four stars but I always give the details of my rating in the comments. Models are gorgeous and if there was any clipping issues in their design I didn't spot any. Frankly the story is way more intriguing than the game page leads you to believe with the mystical side of this visual novel. The element of " okay wait what is happening ?" is definitely present and I didn't see it coming when looking at the game page. Now why 4 and not 5? Has to do with the only real issue I have and it's a common issue which is pacing. I know there's a supernatural element involved but if there had been at least a Time skip of a week it wouldn't have felt so odd at times. The dialogue and everything is wonderfully written and different personalities captured very well. But I would have liked to have seen at least the illusion that sometime had passed and  theMC had gotten time to know the characters at least in the background. But that's my personal taste I just always found the hole I know we just met but I think I love you thing kind of weird and jarring.

That being said I still think this visual novel is worth downloading to anyone who is a fan of erotic visual novels and I will be purchasing the paid version of the game in the coming days soon. 

holy crap short but powerful for sure. keep making more you have talent!

how come the Sprite used for Natasha is a black girl but the character image is just a basic white girl? Feels weird and kind of a bit of a letdown.....

the links dont work????

its fun good use of sound but feel like it needs more somehow

CJ's theme makes me want to go kick ass

any news?????

not me jumping like a kid on christmas!!!!!

i cant wait to download this tomorrow!!!!

Not ready to leave my rating just yet but so far I'm enjoying the graphics character models and the story. Everything so far is being well done. Tho I have to say I'm a little bit nervous when it was said in the beginning that there will be multiple choices but it won't matter for the ending of the story. Feels a little bit like some players are going to be a little bit heartbroken with whoever he ends up with....... unless this is a harem story of some sort or polyamorous Triad I don't know.

Five star rating and you deserve every Star! I have to say especially coming down to the wire at the end I was getting major chills. With no way to save your progress it really put on the pressure to pay attention to everything to make the right choices. Proud to say I managed to figure it out in the end sticking to my gut. You got some real talent for storytelling would love to see other similar games made by you in the future.

Okay you have my attention this sounds really interesting and juicy. but when's the release?

I got to say I've tried a few of these types of games before and never really enjoyed them despite a desire to want to. They were always stressful in the wrong ways quickly overwhelming you before you feel like you had a fair chance. But this game is much more enjoyable take on the style. I feel like you're on to something with the way you do things here and would love to see more.

immediate five stars there's a water world reference

Maybe you could consider charging for other chapters past the first release and treat the first release as a demo or teaser. Patreon gets first dibs and then maybe you could charge $5 for the game here on itch and have the update delayed maybe a week. you could always increase the price a little bit as the game gets longer as well.  I say all this because I do think you have potential. 

will it be coming to itch????

Oh my God I have missed the story so much I'm so glad it's back !!!!!

Well this game kind of came out of nowhere for me. Gave it a shot when it came across my feed as another developer I follow gave it a good five stars. The writing is really good the art is beautiful and so far I'm enjoying exploring. Though I will say I have One Singular complaint that takes a bit of explaining. The main character needs an offhand slot for equipment. Despite what rising of The Shield hero and Captain America will make you think a shield is not a main weapon and should not take the place of a sword as well as a sword breaker is a offhand weapon meant to in theory catch the blade of a Rapier and also should not be a main weapon. I wouldn't mind seeing a future update with an offhand slot where these items would instead boost things like fortitude as well increase armor for the midsection maybe adding extra damage when parrying for the swordbreaker. 

Has anybody actually had that work because I've gone to the mall a couple of times now bouncing around the map trying to get it to trigger and it's not working.

Update figured it out despite on Tuesday clicking on the couch saying can't do that you have a date it's actually the following day that the event will trigger and you can go to the park.

I waited until a little more was out to give the game a shot and so far 4 stars overall. All the models are rendered very well the world doesn't feel empty at all in any shot. I have to say the dev has a real talent for this from the World building models all the way to the writing itself. Even in just two chapters the dev does a really good job of letting the player get a sense of deciding who they are in the story. there are a couple of bull opportunities where that could have also been demonstrated but whether my opinion in that is true or not it certainly does not impact the game in a negative way whatsoever. Truly a good story with interesting lore to explore further in future updates without a doubt add this to the list of ones to watch out for updates.

...... either nothing is changing or I am terrible at this game ...... like I want to play it and I'm usually good at spot the different stuff ...... but it feels like the game just rushes to tell me too many anomalies when I can't even find one

first off I want to thank the Dev for quickly putting together and uploading a PC version so quickly. It was much appreciated!

Now on to the review! First off for future reference this review takes place during 0.0.1 of the games initial launch. It's pretty much the length of a teaser at this point. 

That being said it is a very good teaser. The initial Vibe I'm getting both from the description and gameplay is a mashup of The Purge and The Hunger Games. I mean that in the best way possible truly. This is a very short teaser but the writing is solid characters designed and rendered very well. Of course can't forget the other visuals which are far from feeling empty and well designed sets. I don't know if this is the devs first time attempting something like this or if they are just truly gifted in design in particular. Whatever the case may be I am certainly looking forward to Future updates of this particular game and definitely would recommend following the Dev to help keep an eye out for future updates. There's not much yet but it's easy to see that any fan of visual novels are going to be in for a hell of a ride with this story. 

Was just wondering your game sounds like it has an interesting premise always a sucker for a game with moral choices but will there be a PC release?

um how to fix the landlady thing bit of a pet pev of mine.........

Holy shit this most recent update goes hard. Part of me is willing to wait but I really really hope the next update doesn't take as long as the last one because that Cliffhanger is already driving me crazy and it's not even been 5 minutes since I finished it. Keep up the good work you have a visual novel that is capable of going up there with the top tier stories if you keep this up!

I've waited so long for this day 😭😭😭

Okay I have been putting it off but I finally went through the latest chapter and now I'm in so many tears 😭😭😭

Welp guess I'm going to have to eat my own words. I was sure I wasn't when I started playing this game but I give it a rating of five stars. 

Usual automatic deductions are things like not being able to name the main character or not enough meaningful choices as the mc. However I cannot deny this is truly a incredible story that no fan of visual novels should miss out on. You will laugh you will cry and then you just might laugh some more. No one could deny the clear hard work that was put into these stunning visuals and animations along with the beautifully crafted personalities of each and every character. Not a single character in this story will feel Bland to anyone playing it. The characters in World building has real substance to it that will definitely satisfy your desire for a good story. 

It's clear that this development team is taking their time to crack the story and not Desiring to rush to the finish line. Enjoy the journey this story takes you on you won't regret the download. 

I realize that after getting absorbed in the game regardless. A very interesting story you are crafting here. 

I would say the only thing I'm torn on is I really enjoy 3D models but the art style heavily used in the beginning was beautiful. 

To anyone wondering yes you should give this game a shot especially if you appreciate story over sex. You'll find yourself questioning what is happening often and don't let yourself get comfortable with the thinking that you have the answer because you don't. I myself am looking forward to Future updates of this story.

So I got a question. Is it supposed to change the MC's name to David after typing Danny? Is the name Danny hated? What did a Danny do wrong?

Love the art so far though.

will this be coming to itch???

all right I have posted it there.

in regards to the feeling of clunky it's more of something that was a feeling not a visual. Look like the QuickTime events had trouble starting at least during the fight and everything had to delay to it. Like I kind of had a fight with it to get to the menu just to save. Pushing the buttons a few times to get it to register. 

However I did just now take some pictures of the other thing I mentioned. Where should I post those I did not see a link to the Discord if you have one.

gave the game four stars could change to Five Star depending on future updates. but I figured I would put the proper details of the review in here for any others that care about the opinion.

First the art is just beautiful. At least with the background and the girls. I will say in the beginning there was a few scenes that the main character looked a little bit.... awkward? But that was only in the beginning. I personally try to avoid games story focused or not with too many girls. However each character male or female has a well-crafted personality that doesn't feel Bland or boring.

There is definitely a lot of potential here for a memorable story that in my opinion could end up with some of the top visual novels in my opinion with this art style. High Praise? Maybe but this is based on current content.

I think my only main complaint would be it feels like the quick time events are a little too.... quick. Just a few more seconds would still have the tension but be reasonable for being able to read what in the world you're clicking on before making a choice.

I should add that I originally downloaded this to play on my tablet but have since got my computer working and did a full playthrough on that. The tablet felt a little clunky of course that could mostly just be my tablet's fault. It is a cheap tablet. However the windows version worked practically flawlessly for myself. 

Keep up the good work and I will most likely make edits and tweets to my review as future updates come out. 

Issue seems to Have been resolved. Looks like when my tablet tried to Explain how to pull up The bar when in full screen mode on a app. It caused the game to bug out and crash changing how I navigate the tablet and disabling that Tutorial stopped it.

I just have a basic under a hundred and fifty dollar samsung tablet. Aside from one crash during the introduction, the game seems to be Running just fine now.

This could be just an issue with my tablet but the tablet is brand new. Anyway, trying to launch the game It keeps popping in and out ofull screen trying to tell me something about apps that use full screen and the usual access bar before the game just locks up and crashes As I am trying to select language.

it said the folder was empty?